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Pokimono Quest 6 - SM Reshiram Hunt by Renu-K Pokimono Quest 6 - SM Reshiram Hunt by Renu-K
"I know what it's like to be a monster."

The flames in her eyes died down, leaving only the crystalline color of her eyes gazing back at him, though a small candle-like glow still flickered within them. Though she felt exposed without her mask, she also knew he was the only one she was opening up to right now. He was the only one who could see her face. Her wings too settled down and folded, though they still burned intensely. There was heat, but it was harmless without her using an attack. At this point they were naught but manifestations of her restless emotions. By the looks of the Genesect's face, he could seem to grasp the chaos within her...and understand it. They both seemed to have that self-consuming fire within them that threatened not only their lives, but those around them...

"No matter how much you hunt, you'll never gain more than momentary satisfaction, so you up the ante. You seek larger, stronger targets, increasing the rush but always, no matter how exciting the battle, how thrilling the chase, how gratifying the kill is or how close to death you cling it all eventually goes away…and you are left purposeless once more. You think your purpose is to hunt because that was the purpose given to you, yet for some reason it doesn’t fulfill this sense of…emptiness in you."

Here she paused and gazed downward, speaking as much to herself as he was to him. "For how can you ever gain any sense of fulfillment or even peace when you can’t even stop warring with yourself?”

Incredible, how alike they were. Ever since she investigated that abandoned building after its discovery, read through the experiments and Acuity's information reports, she felt a connection. A dangerous one.

"Your targets became bigger, stronger, until all you had left was..." she gazed upward to the sky, where she was sure the gods were watching down on them, listening, waiting. Her gaze fell back to the Genesect. "But it’s much more than that—you wouldn’t go to such lengths of destroying so much and uprooting so many lives if it wasn’t for a deeper purpose. If hunting was the purpose you were born for, then why does it no longer give you satisfaction? Just what were you put on this earth to do? Why would they give you a life of pain and loneliness if all that it would amount to…was this…?"

A little smile crawled across her lips, sincere this time. "But you know, it’s not hopeless. You don’t have to feel lost. I’ve found you. From one monster to another, I think I can help you."

He was gazing downward, clenching his teeth and his fists tightly while he struggled inwardly with something. Finally, he spoke. "...Why...?" His voice croaked in a raspy, low voice. It sounded raw with disuse.

An answer came quickly to Noria. “Your actions have killed dozens of people and destroyed thousands of homes… but I believe you can save much more than that.”

He pointed his weapon at her, his words halting awkwardly as he spoke. "I don’t want to save. I—want—a challenge. If not a god…then another monster."

She paused and smiled warmly. "Oh, I haven’t properly thanked you yet, have I?" She grasped the end of the weapon he pointed at her as if it were his hand. "Thank you, for saving my life."

He seemed to stare for a moment, recalling someone else who smiled and held the end of the cannon like that...but he quickly interrupted the thought by snatching his weapon back with a growl. Noria continued prattling on.

“You know, we could provide you with challenges if that’s what you want. There’s only so much information one can gather alone, so imagine if you had an entire network at your disposal. I’m quite positive we have information on creatures you’ve never even imagined before. Also…we have a lot of good food! How about it? I know what it’s like…to be left alone. If you can find it in yourself, perhaps one day you can open your trust again. And maybe…you can find somewhere you belong, but more importantly, something that can give you a more fulfilling purpose.”

Even if all of Pokimono called for his head for execution, to pay for his crimes and all the lives he took through his mistakes, she would do everything in her power to keep him alive. Out of the goodness of her heart? Perhaps. More importantly, it was because the people, those 'scholars' that created him were still at large...and he was their best tool at tracking them down. And if they could create a tool this powerful, who knew what the future held if they remained at large...


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EDIT: Mmm, not sure what was going on, but some of the middle panels were glitching after I uploaded it... Should be fixed now hopefully :/
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For those who are possibly confused about the story (because I had to cut a lot out simply due to time and file size) here's a background summary:

Noria collected information on Genesect based on the findings of the other leaders, the villagers, and the remains of the experiments conducted at the abandoned building. From there she was able to piece together just what drove them to abandon Genesect in the first place and why he went to destroy the Kami Trio's shrine.

Based on sightings by the villagers, she was able to finally track him down despite his sporadic appearances around the outskirts of the various villages. It was apparent that he was searching for something quite intently without much care for being seen since he was sighted so often.

Finally, she caught him in the middle of the destruction of a little shrine in the woods dedicated to Arceus--she watched him wreck the building for some time, and unlike how 'emotionless' and 'scary' the other villagers seemed to describe him, he appeared...angry. Frustrated. Even lost in the midst of his senseless destruction. That was when it came together for her--because she too, once long ago, broke down and took out all her frustrations on Arceus.

Quickly formulating a plan, she silently stalked off into the woods in search of a threatening pokemon--this was when she stumbled across a rhyhorn grazing. Brainless. Agressive. Perfect. She taunted and aggravated it til it lost its temper and all too easily began chasing her. She lost it easily but made sure not to stray too far from it, basically leading it toward the shrine. Although the traps she found in the woods that the Genesect left to probably capture his meals while he was gone were indicative of his hunting skills, she needed a test of his combat skill. If she was going to stake it all on him, he had to live up to her expectations.

She approached him, weaponless of course (because who conducts negotiations while armed?) and in a harmless, dumb manner that would be sure to make him believe she was not a threat. As far as she knew, he only attacked those that attacked him. The poor hydreigon girl (Arok) was among these, while the puppet-wielding ditto (Seikomaro) was evidence to how he did not attack those who were obviously not a threat to him. The theft of the ditto's mask was a curious event however...

Sure enough, all of her deductions seemed to hit home with him as she retold the story of his life that she was able to string together from the evidence. The performance was made even better by the fact that she identified with him--it made it all that much easier to connect with him. Even the rhyhorn had impeccable timing as it happened to find her right at the climax of her story. Though she had not expected to get caught in the crossfire, it worked out. He was able to see firsthand that he was not the only abnormal one. Perhaps there was hope yet that she would get through to him.

UGH I WRITE TOO MUCH
Yeah, so I'M SORRY ACUITY I'M NOT GOOD AT DRAWING YOU, I FAIL OTL And did you guys catch little Koori? I tried to draw when they might have met in the past OTL I also tried to feature some of our SM villagers in that one panel~ Sorry I couldn't fit in more! >n<;;


Acuity (c) :iconout-witted:
Koori (c) :iconcruzfehu:
Noria [link] (c) Me~
Splatter texture: [link]
Water texture: [link]
Kouki's app: [link]

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rosey996 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Great story!
And your an awesome drawer.
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Jhfuyriutduyfiuguyr Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Student Artist
THAT IS A GOOD F***ING STORRY!!! kepit up! thats rilly good!
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Ragnarock227 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the flame eyes you did for her and him! THEY ARE SO EPIC!!!! ^0^
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Bawwww, thank you so much Ragnarok! QuQ :heart: Flames are so much fun to draw~ I'm so glad to have a Fire-type gijinka now! >u<
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Ragnarock227 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes but the way you did them with her eyes was breathtaking! XD
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llawll Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
:iconamgtouchplz: I just love this so much, and I wanted to wait until the winners were announced before I commented, but this was really just so amazing. The way you told the story, and the art, and the detail, and the emotion - it was breathtaking.

:iconbrohugplz: Good luck!
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Llawwl why are you so nice? :iconrlytearplz: Seriously this comment it just--ahh, completely made my whole week ;u; I really admire you as an artist so this means a lot coming from you, thank you so much! I hope we'll see a lot more of each other in the future~ I can't wait to work more with you guys for the group! >u< :iconbrohugplz:
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llawll Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
:iconasdfghplz: You're amazing and I'm sure we will~ I can't wait to work with you~
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himori Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
I LOVE this story. I don't CARE how cliche or bad you THINK it is I LOVE IT. :iconcryforeverplz: I love sad Genesect so much. Makes me want to kiss him better. QAQ
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
AIGHAOAOIGHOA THANK YOU HIMORIIIIIII AMG QuQ :hug:

AWWWW, yeah Gen-Gen needs some lovins too ;n; It didn't seem right or that interesting to me to treat him only as a chara that's there purely to be seen as inhuman and hated with no personal history/development, sooo... *throws in her derp ideas about his background and such to make things more interesting hopefully*
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himori Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
:iconworshipplz: I love them ideas <3 I don't think it makes him totally redeemable by any means but he certainly has more depth now.
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WingsOfImagination Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
\0/ SO LONG AND SO AWESOME. I like how you linked all those stuffs together!
*and was that Zen and Keichi in one of those panels? XDDD*
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
OMG YOU READ IT ALL? ;A; YOU'RE the awesome one for persevering then! ;u; Ah, but thank you so much! I liked your comic as well, using Sen's ability to transform into one of the Kami Trio~ *hugs a Sen for working so hard and hopes he doesn't hurt himself more*
PFFFT you got it~ Featured a whole bunch of SMers in that panel XD
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WingsOfImagination Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
\0/ I am glad that you enjoyed the comic :P

SenGensou : :iconshyblushplz:

Something really intrigues me though... I wonder who's the guy who got fused with Gen-Gen XD (and what kind of gijinka he is since all the peeps in pokimono are gijinaks.
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Hehe of course I enjoyed it! >u<

Awww Seeen c'mere and let me hug that faaace ;u;

Ahhh, that's a great question~ I'll leave it a secret for now until I learn what we end up doing with Gen-Gen |D
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xXEternal-twilightXx Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
AMG THAT WAS AWESOME!!!! :iconexplodelaplz::iconexplodelaplz::iconexplodelaplz:
I really enjoyed the story >W<!!~:heart::heart::heart::heart:
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Ahhh, thank you so much!! *:iconexplodelaplz:'s with you :heart:* I'm glad it was an interesting long read instead of just a long read "XD
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DingDingy Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
TOO MUCH WRITING :iconfuckthatshitplz: ... jk... IT WAS SO GOOD I READ IT ALLLLLLLLL :icontearplz: praise meh.... *shot*

QuQ!!! I love how you solved the problem man!!! THIS IS AWESOM!! especially the comparison part of the manga!!! so good, so good~~~ Best of luck to you Renu!!! YOU CAN DO IT!!! :iconyeyplz:
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
HOLY GEEZ DINGDING OAO *gives you ALL THE KUDOS for reading everything* :iconbrohugplz:
BAWWWW THANK YOU SO MUCH!! asihgahgaoh YOU'RE SO NICE AND AMAZING :iconsupertackleplz::iconrainbowsparkleplz:
Btw, I really liked your quest pic too! I felt so bad for poor Zen and his garden though ;A; *hits Kouki and pushes him to help Zen repair his garden* >n>
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DingDingy Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sdjflskdf >u<~~~ All the skillz and lucks for you getting the position man!!! :iconbrohugplz:
dawwwww =u= you too nice renunu

:iconzensadplz: Q7Q ... .. kouki-san!?
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HoiGao Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Daaaaaaaaaaang, this is AWESOME Renu! I like this Reshiram leader the best by FAR! Good luck! This is ALL the AMAZINGS 8D
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
OMG HOI QAQ Such an epic compliment from you, I feel super honored right now omg ;u; (and no that's not sarcasm, I really do feel humbled because I love your art a lot >u<) Ah, BUT THANK YOU SO MUCH :heart::heart::heart: I'm glad she wasn't too affected by the derpiness of her creator lol XD I still think your Reshiram design was epic amounts of awesomeness ;u;
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Cheesegoddess Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
WHat?! TO much writing? No shut up! YOU SHUT UP!! This is awesome! I love both what you drew and what you wrote! Very awesome! And I'm really please to see another leader trying to be peaceful LOL

And the reason for the thief? I think we ALL know he was just wondering just what was under that pink mask ;)
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
EHHHH?! :iconshockplz: BUT IT'S SO MUCH TO READ THAT THE FILE SIZE REFUSED TO LET ME ADD MORE LOL, and then on top of that the artist comment stuff was a long read too ;A; BUT OMG CHEESY, thank you sooooso much for the sweet comment :huggle: Hahaha, yeah I dunno, she's a bit more cunning nice than to just bash and bag the Genesect, but I did miss out on making an awesome fight scene like everyone else ono;; But dialogue stories are more my thing anyway XD *sucks at drawing fighting poses OTL*

LOOOOL the mystery~ :iconwooooplz: I was actually planning on trying to add that as a quirk of Genesect's, that he likes to steal masks or something because they remind him of the Yamask girl who was so nice to him during all that experimentation QuQ
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Cheesegoddess Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
I thought her not using her whole skill and power was pretty badass if you ask me!

LOL Oh dear if the that's true, Ro's going to be running away from Genesect a great deal of the time!
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trana-blay5 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oAo *Faints from the epicness*
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
NOOOO *catches and loves on you to help revive you* ;n; :heart:
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trana-blay5 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've been loved! :dummy:
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Azure-Grimalkin Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Holy crap! I don't even... you're good!
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
EH? Th-Thank you, Shock! OAO That means so much coming from such a great artist like you! QuQ I really liked your contest entry too, so intense~! The colors were amazing as well ;u;
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Azure-Grimalkin Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
O///O really? Thank you!
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brown-tiger15 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Omigawd. If members are voting I'm voting THIS.
Your character both deals with the situation at hand, keeps her humanity er or pokemonity, all while keeping future threats in mind.
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh gosh, thank you so much! Hahaha I like that word, 'pokemonity!' I get exactly what you're saying because that's exactly what I was going for! She seems like an airhead at first, but really she is doing her best to deal with the situation in the best way possible, even if people are unhappy with her later for not killing him OTL
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brown-tiger15 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know my character wouldn't be happy with it, but I can only see that as a bonus. I mean character conflict is great! It'll be great to see how all the other characters would react to such an unexpected event and how they would cope.
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WhiteWings Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow...o.o That was really a wonderfully written comic and plot! I wish I had better words to express how I felt about the whole thing, just wow :clap:

And I love your Reshiram so~ much: cute but very cool too.
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Bawww, thank youuuuuu~! Such a sweet comment, it really means a lot to me! QuQ :hug:

Hahaha thanks! She can be quite the silly thing on first appearances and then once you dig deeper it's all the sadness and seriousness ;A;
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Jecksy-Candy Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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this is.......amazing
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
YOU'RE amazing :iconbrohugplz:
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b0409d Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
..... I approve of her munching on food
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Hahahaha ikr? I wanna have some too ;u; /HIT
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Watervoir Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
"...without much care for being seen since he was sighted so often." LOLOLOL

I like how you incorporated other characters and their sightings into your submission. Good job and good luck. C:
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
LMAO as long as they don't get in his way or attack him, he couldn't care less if he tried XD AND HE GOT SPOTTED A LOT, SO IT'S NOT LIKE HE CAN PRETEND TO BE A NINJA *shakes head at him thinking he's got a thing or two to learn from Noir Vale*

Haha, thank you! I wanted to mention all the villagers' entries (including yours! The comic was a cute read~ *loves on Mint and Momoko's antics* >u<) that I read into that little blurb about the information she gathered, but I was short on time OTL
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Soupmeal Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hnnn. Renuuuuu
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Soupyyyyyy ;u; :icongrabbyhands:
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CrowMoe Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
This... is amazing. I mean whoa. Wow. This took my breath away and this has been the most original out take of this quest ever. I simply love it.
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Angeeel, oh gosh, thank you soooo much for the beautiful comment. It makes it all worth it to know that I was able to provide a good and memorable story for you all to read :heart: I saw your quest pic too and OMG AROK NOOOOOOOO *calls all the Blissey nurses in SM to help her* ;n; It was really well-done, I enjoyed reading it! >u<
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CrowMoe Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
No problem! This was so adorable but realistically put as well. No way subterfuge or anything! andArokmightbeloosingtheuseofherleg|D;;;; BUT now that I've seen you're accepted as the reshiram~ :iconheplz: *starts to work on hospital pic. With your permission of course to add Noria*
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwww thank youu ;u; :heart: OMG NOOOO AROK AOIGEHOAEHGAOIH QAQ *SAVES THE LEG WITH MAGICAL HEALING POWERS* QmQ

Haha of course you have my permission! ;u; <3
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CrowMoe Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
And Of course would you like to rp? :iconlazycryplz: *should have asked first before randomly stealing Noria*
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Renu-K Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha of course! LOL it's okay, I'm sure she'll find her way home even if she gets stolen ;u;
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